During the month of May (and as part of my book tour/promotion), I'm going to serialize some sections of my short story, The Insanity of Zero, for you. I wrote this after I wrote my book that just got published. I hope you like it. It has a lot to do with the same world that SLIPSTREAM takes place in.
Here's part one.
I'll post the next paragraph Thursday, so that I don't miss the Insecure Writer's Support Group. :)
Have a great day.
Here's part one.
The Insanity of Zero
The
world died on July 16th, 1945 in a flash of light at a location
about 35-miles southeast of Socorro, New Mexico known as the White Sands
Proving Ground. The device responsible
for this destruction was called Trinity,
and it was an assessment of an implosion-design plutonium weapon. Ground zero was consumed in an atomic
fireball and in a mirror universe a deadly burst of electromagnetic radiation
erupted into the White Tower.
The
humans of Avalon had lived in a world ruled by technology. However, the White Tower was a thing that
defied scientific understanding. It was
a piece of the old mysteries, an artifact that some say was left behind by the
ancient ones who had taught the Egyptians how to build the pyramids. Others believed it was the house of god
himself. But whatever the White Tower might
be, one thing about it remained irrefutable. It rose from the sunbaked deserts of New Mexico higher than Mount Everest. Human memory could not recall a
time without it. No one knew what lay
inside it; only that any who attempted to enter had never been heard from
again.
Ten
miles wide at the base, the structure sundered a land where nothing grew. Rain never fell there, and birds did not
circle in the sky. The bitter clay that
comprised the desert floor remained shattered and cracked for as far as the eye
could see.
I'll post the next paragraph Thursday, so that I don't miss the Insecure Writer's Support Group. :)
Have a great day.
Intriguing! Looking forward to the next installment :-)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing! Looking forward to the next installment :-)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this beginning. I can't wait until the next part!
ReplyDeleteThe little bit of a story you posted sounds interesting. Also, the spider in your blog banner is so very creepy and raises so many questions. Is it in your book? It is awesome.
ReplyDeleteI love when you use Arthurian names and places in your work :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery!
ReplyDeleteWhat a tease.
ReplyDeleteThat a great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteAnd I just love the word "sundered."
It's a word that evokes strong imagery.
@Kate: Thanks.
ReplyDelete@Brinda: I'm not a short story writer so I hope it's exciting. It really is a short story (4500 words).
@Jessica: The glass spiders are an integral part of my book. I think the cover artists did a fantastic job in painting/rendering them. I love the gears in the belly.
@Dezmond: My story is allegory Dezzy. It becomes more apparent in book two which I'm still struggling to write.
@Jess: Thank you miss.
@PT: Are you being sarcastic? Is grumpy grumpy?
@Jay: I like powerful verbs.
I'm hooked!
ReplyDeleteThis is pretty dope.
ReplyDeleteExcellent beginning. And serializing a story is so Dickensian, which I am very into right now.
ReplyDeleteWhat a start! Love the first line and it just gets better from there. I'll be following along.
ReplyDeleteGreat description! It felt like I was there. I totally could see it.
ReplyDeleteVery cool, and interesting imagery.
ReplyDeleteI was excited about your book before. This makes me even more so. Such a poetic way of describing The Bomb. :)
ReplyDeleteWell, I'll be here Thursday, then.
ReplyDeleteA captivating start :-)
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to imagine a structure taller than Mount Everest...
Awesome! Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeletelooking forward to Thursday's installment. Just grabbed my copy of Slipstream on Amazon.co.uk - so excited to have a read!!! - I'll leave you a review as soon as I'm done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the reminder of ISWG - I'll have to break my 'break' to post! Best of luck with the tour,
Lx
Ooooo....Can't wait to tune in next Thursday!
ReplyDeleteGreat idea to post your story. I really like your writing. Love the last line - I can't wait to see what happens.
ReplyDeleteLove your high-concept mind, Michael. Always fabulous :)
ReplyDeletegreat start..i am interested! and wishing you way lots of luck with your book tour...congrats to you!!!
ReplyDeleteLove the last paragraph!
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