tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post6465520954114442154..comments2024-03-22T12:11:58.453-06:00Comments on Michael Offutt: First Campaign ChallengeMichael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comBlogger89125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-81141189974940751882011-09-14T03:46:53.664-06:002011-09-14T03:46:53.664-06:00Reminded me of 'Seven' too but the twist f...Reminded me of 'Seven' too but the twist for me was the genre of the protagonist. For some reason it surprised me and I'm still wondering why. Kudos to you!<br /><br />StobbyStobbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17307341548219021848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-43818005088382573842011-09-12T23:30:45.379-06:002011-09-12T23:30:45.379-06:00Creepy! I thought it was turning out to be such a ...Creepy! I thought it was turning out to be such a "normal" story and then WHAM! Head in a cooler box!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-91851018446655093002011-09-12T15:14:15.016-06:002011-09-12T15:14:15.016-06:00YIKES! :-) But, I'm a big fan of coffee mugs ....YIKES! :-) But, I'm a big fan of coffee mugs ... so that was my favorite part!Margo Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13474612650116392270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-53691256489682331842011-09-12T11:10:34.282-06:002011-09-12T11:10:34.282-06:00Ha! I like it. I'm such a sucker for crime dra...Ha! I like it. I'm such a sucker for crime drama and UPS guys with nice butts.Angela Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15598455060979053040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-37792340216126921792011-09-11T15:19:31.928-06:002011-09-11T15:19:31.928-06:00Creepy and then some! Great job. New follower no...Creepy and then some! Great job. New follower now too. :)Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-76502015228702078212011-09-10T21:16:20.944-06:002011-09-10T21:16:20.944-06:00We happen to have a very attractive UPS guy at wor...We happen to have a very attractive UPS guy at work. Unfortunately, I don't get to see him as much as I would like. After reading your flash fic, maybe I should be grateful. Great job, and kudos for the judging organizational skills!Lisa Pottshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11676087488599338569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-28277899742172882392011-09-10T13:49:38.191-06:002011-09-10T13:49:38.191-06:00I love all the different directions this challenge...I love all the different directions this challenge has taken. Well done and thanks for helping Rach!Sand Castles and Snow Fortshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07447026893775380783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-91467337681133001152011-09-10T06:48:51.517-06:002011-09-10T06:48:51.517-06:00I was dragged into a CSI moment almost from the op...I was dragged into a CSI moment almost from the opening. I enjoyed reading this. As the scene unfolded, I was gripped.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-62212736749272817562011-09-09T15:23:00.918-06:002011-09-09T15:23:00.918-06:00Where can I find a coffee mug that says that? ;) A...Where can I find a coffee mug that says that? ;) And why aren't my UPS guys cute? Nice story with a creepy ending that begs for more.Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-61593479574014067172011-09-09T13:12:08.229-06:002011-09-09T13:12:08.229-06:00I'll never look my UPS guy the same way again!...I'll never look my UPS guy the same way again! LOL. <br /><br />Great story. Super fun. :DCherylAnne Hamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02324135447961686703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-73637422549596226882011-09-09T12:59:05.001-06:002011-09-09T12:59:05.001-06:00Gross. I had a feeling that's what would be in...Gross. I had a feeling that's what would be inside. Mine is #72bridgethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01553619856059414447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-89753827270278599062011-09-09T11:42:24.085-06:002011-09-09T11:42:24.085-06:00I really like this! Love the twist at the end - bu...I really like this! Love the twist at the end - but then, I do like gore.<br /><br />My entry is #348K.T. Hannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477211734721721621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-11293481372639433032011-09-08T18:20:04.335-06:002011-09-08T18:20:04.335-06:00Great story! I love the details about the coffee c...Great story! I love the details about the coffee cup and the ogling :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06040374669996990205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-72978904337066286322011-09-08T18:17:59.065-06:002011-09-08T18:17:59.065-06:00Nice! A hot UPS guy, an awesome mug and a human he...Nice! A hot UPS guy, an awesome mug and a human head in a cooler...I couldn't ask for much more. ;)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-85367487977318674452011-09-08T08:14:51.733-06:002011-09-08T08:14:51.733-06:00ooh creepy! Love it!ooh creepy! Love it!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-52910680782612031862011-09-07T21:27:32.774-06:002011-09-07T21:27:32.774-06:00Hey, fellow Utahn! Nice twist there at the end. Gr...Hey, fellow Utahn! Nice twist there at the end. Great job! :DKatie Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17554091817717890150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-42235115103233581782011-09-07T19:46:04.721-06:002011-09-07T19:46:04.721-06:00Fun & chilling at the same time. My hubby razz...Fun & chilling at the same time. My hubby razzes me about the UPS guy, because he always shows up when the hubby is at work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691497935668743387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-8710259855796753522011-09-07T19:37:31.385-06:002011-09-07T19:37:31.385-06:00Very creepy- I like it.I want to work where a UPS ...Very creepy- I like it.I want to work where a UPS guy comes everydayAlica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-73469935287343069312011-09-07T18:33:34.402-06:002011-09-07T18:33:34.402-06:00Now, the question is, did the UPS man know the hea...Now, the question is, did the UPS man know the head was in the package?<br /><br />I'm going to start work on my entry tonight. I'm feeling excited. :)Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-90312699165320965232011-09-07T16:38:27.120-06:002011-09-07T16:38:27.120-06:00Whoa! I didn't see that coming! Great twist. L...Whoa! I didn't see that coming! Great twist. Love the voice :-)Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-91292852976764152642011-09-07T16:13:01.691-06:002011-09-07T16:13:01.691-06:00This is great. :)This is great. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01644181736452678376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-55132623583021298802011-09-07T14:44:27.389-06:002011-09-07T14:44:27.389-06:00Hey there! You've been shortlisted to round tw...Hey there! You've been shortlisted to round two of the challenge. :)<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-63924660613905189722011-09-07T11:36:20.167-06:002011-09-07T11:36:20.167-06:00I love the twist at the end. Too bad we don't ...I love the twist at the end. Too bad we don't get to see where this is going :)Alyson Burdettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16916059117572619004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-78364632508065198512011-09-07T01:13:56.797-06:002011-09-07T01:13:56.797-06:00Lol! That was great. I so didn't see that comi...Lol! That was great. I so didn't see that coming :).Isis Rushdanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773053495985834484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2495499100279472520.post-86533063888862896322011-09-06T20:50:10.947-06:002011-09-06T20:50:10.947-06:00Reminds me of a Closer episode.Reminds me of a Closer episode.Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.com